By Odin.Blazza 2010-10-23 23:20:48
I'm going to respond on a purely video editing stand-point here. My first tip for video editing, is to actually edit your video. Second tip is to show a video that's actually interesting. The intro/outro look okay, but it's very clear that you've just found the filters section of After Effects/Premier/Whatever you're using, you don't even have all your elements at the same resolution, so you have visible bounding boxes. Don't use effects just because you can (talking mostly about your text flying all over the place), and limit the amount of air-time you dedicate to titles, you've got 30 seconds of titles for 1 minute of footage, when the footage is what people want to look at (unless it's boring crap, which it kinda is).
PS. Music sucks, and both crabs and boars have been in the game since very first alpha, so neither are a "new mob" any more than the rest of them.